Todd Schoonover is rehashing old avatars

Write 43 poems about 43 people. (read all 37 entries…)
Belislomax

L’inquiétude surmonte lui et des tractions subites à son coeur
Ses dents vibrent contre ses ongles comme le rat sonores
Il lutte vaillamment réalisant l’air vainqueur
Emprisonné il est par son hantise comme les esclaves des Mores.

Ses insécurités lavent au-dessus de lui comme un voile de mal
Ses ennuis de côté par de nouveaux amis peuvent être mise
Nous ébrécherons indiquer loin sa force comme une roche en cristal
Dans l’amitié ensemble son courage s’est assise.

In the style of Charles Baudelaire for Maxime on his birthday. I apologize in advance for the mutilated French grammar but it’s hard to make things rhyme properly when I’m 20 years out of practice.



Comments:

Impressing!

Because I can see a bit of Baudelaire in it! And you know, French poetry had that particularity that you can mix the order and everything in the sentences and it just makes everything look more poetic… LOL!

Yeah, we’re weird.

There are a few things I didn’t exactly understand, to be honest! But it happens often when I’m reading poetry. :P

Todd Schoonover is rehashing old avatars

Dans Anglais

Basically the poem was about your insecurities and anxieties, and their effects like biting your fingernails making the sound of rats. But through the support of new friends here, we’ll help encourage and support you so you can overcome them as we point out your strengths.


 

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