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Just Like Me 4 years ago

Love no other

then yourself

worship greed

lust for wealth

beleave in nothing

as a show of coures

hurt others

without remores

never work

always lie

live this way

untill the day you die

then at last

you will be judged

you will be asked

who did you love

how did you spend

your sands of time

thats when you’ll pay

for your crimes

for in the end

you will see

that you will burn

just like me

Zedrea Bognar Hartley



Comments:

Its excellent! Keep at it! Go for the dream, I’m sure you’ll get published! :)

WOW!

thats an AMAZING poem! i most likely will comment on every poem after i read it! i think you can easily get that published. g/l!!

crystalclear_1 PLEASE COMMENT MY NEW POEMS!

hey

thats a fantastic poem i would love to hear some of your feedback on mine pleaseee!!! it would mean alot ahha ive never ever done this before and i hope you could comment and i could do the same to you … this one is one of my favourites. I feel its exactly how i live my life and exacty; what will happen if i took the wrong path … keep up on the good work i loovvee itt!!! please could you feeback mine

lots of love crystal-clear xxxx


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