Its excellent! Keep at it! Go for the dream, I’m sure you’ll get published! :)

thats an AMAZING poem! i most likely will comment on every poem after i read it! i think you can easily get that published. g/l!!

thats a fantastic poem i would love to hear some of your feedback on mine pleaseee!!! it would mean alot ahha ive never ever done this before and i hope you could comment and i could do the same to you … this one is one of my favourites. I feel its exactly how i live my life and exacty; what will happen if i took the wrong path … keep up on the good work i loovvee itt!!! please could you feeback mine

lots of love crystal-clear xxxx