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Poetry? 2 years ago

I’ve NEVER even tried doing poetry aside from the one time that I had to write a poem for my English class in High School. However, I think that would be a cool skill to have. So, a couple days ago, I decided to try my hand at it. Tell me what you think… and be honest.


When found before him on that day,
In all his splendor, I shall kneel.
When all evil is cast away,
I can’t imagine how I’ll feel,
To hear those words that he will say,
“Upon your heart was placed my seal,
For you know Christ, My Son, The Way!”



Comments:

flutter is full of wonder and watching God work

keep it up

not to bad…a little rough around the edges…but defiantly has potential
keep working on it


Oogyboogawa- trusting, waiting, following has gotten 2 cheers on this entry.

 

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