dipsomaniacalman humming birds don't know the words...

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a girl:

i met a girl whose skin was blue,
she taught me how to fly.
then off into the night she flew
and never said goodbye.

i’ve searched and searched around and round,
and all across the world,
then cried because i never found
my little blue-skinned girl…

xxx.



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spreadyourwings is cleaning out the cupboards!

A poet in the making :P

You seem to like poetry a lot and to have an aptitude for it… what is it about writing these little random and well structured things that inspires you to do it :)???

Do you like collect them or write them down anywhere else??? I’m intrigued by it.

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dipsomaniacalman humming birds don't know the words...

i...

... like the rhymes.

:D

i am just a wee child really. and if it doesn’t rhyme… it is not poetry, damnit.

:/

j/k. i don’t know. i just think of little phrases and then create the rest around them. i had a good one pop into my head before and now i have to let it percolate for a while.

i like to romanticise loss and confusion. maybe this says something about me? do i need tragedy in my life? or do i have tragedy aplenty in my life, and this is my coping mechanism? gosh, who knows? seriously, one could so easily entail the other.

i don’t really collect them anywhere. they just come, and they go.

maybe i should make a little collection for myself? :)

xxx.

spreadyourwings is cleaning out the cupboards!

I'd say you should!!!!

My Poetry editor likes to try and psychoanalyse everything I write because my poetry is apparently always “tinged with sadness”. I think it’s defo a little of everything you mentioned!!!!!!!

You could collect them up and send them in somewhere with a cover letter orrrrr just keep em together for your own enjoyment. I keep mine in a poetry journal along with drawings of my hand because I’m strange like that lol…

I haven’t the guts to put em on the web though and unlike yours mine don’t rhyme most of the time unless they’re required to do so.

I do love poetry though. I’m majoring in it next year!
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dipsomaniacalman humming birds don't know the words...

i'm sorry?

what do you mean?

xxx.

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dipsomaniacalman humming birds don't know the words...

oh, me!

i am sure you are still good, though. don’t listen to any guy who tells you that you are a tease. that’s nonsense. and even if it weren’t, that’s fine, too. seriously, if you like your boy, and it seems like you do, then just remember that you can always walk away from the other situation.

although, of course, you should remember that i do not know anything about anything.

:)

xxx.

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~*Serenity*~ ~*Forget not the earth delights to feel your bare feet: Gibran*~

You know this makes me smile.

I love when you post your work.

dipsomaniacalman humming birds don't know the words...

thank...

... you, wren.

:)

xxx.

~*Serenity*~ ~*Forget not the earth delights to feel your bare feet: Gibran*~

You know how I feel DMC: I might not be able to spend the time I want to, reading everything on here. Or spend the time on messenger keeping up.

But you know how fond of you I really am.

XXXOOO


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