Ok so I wrote a new poem.
Tell me what you think.
and please be honest.
if you like it cool if you hate it don’t be afraid to tell me.
Critique only makes you better.
Waiting.
You moved back home, and left me here.
You told me not to wait for you.
But waiting is all I can do.
I’ll wait for the next time I see y our face.
I’ll wait for the next time I feel your warm embrace.
I’ll wait for the next time our lips touch.
And I’ll wait for the next time I hear you say those three words that mean so much.
I’ll be waiting.

