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Written at 2:25pm, PST, for dear Venus 12 months ago

Embrace on the Field

Drinking cider too tart
for my unsophisticated
tongue, I read her
words. Friend from far away
I had dared to imagine
I knew.

Her paintings ripe fruit
of women lined and
luscious, dripping scent
from the quiet pages,
filling suburbia’s blur with
whispers and tears.

I wondered if men who
fought the same war in
different arenas felt as I do.
She has been there,
as have I,
as many others in this war
women fight without ceasing,
undeclared, undecorated.

Yet her words, her pain and joy,
are piercing next to my
muted murmuring. Not that one
pain need ask for another’s
assent, not that one joy
outstrips a dissimilar bliss.
We hurt. We heal.
We repair those torn
who can be saved.

This woman, my friend,
my light into darkness,
has shown me her heart.
I know not what flower
of mine I can share.
I would grow a world’s garden
to let her know:

She is seen.
She is heard.
She is loved.



Comments:

I wanted the poem

to stand alone. It came out of me almost as soon as I finished reading the book. It’s an amazing piece of art. I feel as if there are buds under my skin about to blossom.

You have transformed me. Thank you for sharing this with the world.

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I adore you,

dear heart. It sprang out of my hand and I couldn’t have stopped it if I had tried. You inspire me.

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Woo-hoo for the boo-hoo!

This is beautiful and big. You’ve got rivers and oceans in there and they’ve been waiting!


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