"Only if you promise....." on Post Poetry. on 43 Things

intothebreach Did not fall off the face of the earth, but came close

"Only if you promise....." 12 months ago

“It’s cold outside, come in”
She says with a smile.
“Only if you promise….
To keep me warm tonight.”

“I can give it a try.”
She says with a kiss.
“Only if you promise….
To stay this way tonight.”

They kept there promises.
He managed to stay.
She kept him warm that night.

Jul 03, 2008, 08:27PM PDT | 13 cheers

:-)

Jul 03, 2008, 11:45PM PDT | Thread | Respond to this

intothebreach Did not fall off the face of the earth, but came close

Hi, glad you liked it.

Jul 04, 2008, 05:25PM PDT | Respond to this

flutter is full of wonder is is praying for and supporting Sherlock

I like it

Jul 06, 2008, 10:56PM PDT | Thread | Respond to this

intothebreach Did not fall off the face of the earth, but came close

Hi, I did not want to post this at first, but now I am kind of glad.

Jul 07, 2008, 11:18AM PDT | Respond to this

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Jul 07, 2008, 01:28PM PDT

intothebreach Did not fall off the face of the earth, but came close

Hi, well you did help. So, I guess I should thank you.

Jul 07, 2008, 03:50PM PDT | Respond to this

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