A Staggering Rat of Heartbreaking Something or Other "I musta made a wrong toin at Al-buh-KOY-kee"

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Saturday, August 2, 2008 Haiku #80 16 months ago

I could not reach her.
The day, warm and summerlike
She won’t know or miss.

Aug 02, 2008, 10:35PM PDT | 2 cheers


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petrnotail

special

this surely is

Aug 03, 2008, 05:05AM PDT | Respond to this

A Staggering Rat of Heartbreaking Something or Other "I musta made a wrong toin at Al-buh-KOY-kee"

I

aimed for poignant. Did I succeed?

Aug 03, 2008, 09:05PM PDT | Thread | Respond to this 1 cheer

petrnotail

poignant

yes, yes

Aug 04, 2008, 05:15AM PDT | Respond to this


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