intothebreach Did not fall off the face of the earth, but came close

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Between you and I. 14 months ago

There’s a distance,
Between you and I.
I cannot hold you.
And you could never,
Look me in the eye.

Lights beckoning,
To see the show.
In the crowd were lost.
We are just as lost,
When were together.

I cannot hold you.
And you never would,
Close the distance that’s,
Between you and I.



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nicolasc needs to incorporate more fruits and vegetables into her being. After all, you are what you eat....no, wait...

I've written

my first few bits of what I like to think of as poetry. Well, actually it’s kinda writing itself these days when I get overwhelmed by some experience or other, then it kind of spills out. Now, my poetry is to poetry what Velveeta is to cheese—it ain’t no Brie de Meaux, dontcha know. But it does the job.

Thought I’d share that with you since you’re my young Poet at Heart on 43things…

intothebreach Did not fall off the face of the earth, but came close

Sure.

Hi, I would love to read it. If you want to message it, or just post it on the same goal I will read it.

nicolasc needs to incorporate more fruits and vegetables into her being. After all, you are what you eat....no, wait...

Oh, sorry - misunderstanding.

I can’t share the actual poetry, but thought I’d share with you that I had written some.

intothebreach Did not fall off the face of the earth, but came close

Oh.

Hi, well when you are ready to let someone read it, I would be more than happy to. :)


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