write a book and have it published

I just finished writting a short story i would love to get some comments on it, here the link;
http://community.livejournal.com/bannan_banger/
Don’t be shy if it’s bad say it’s bad, if it’s awafull say it’s awfull just please say why you think so.
Thanks guys.

i’ll check it and then post it on the same site as below

and you guy can read it if you like here’s the site i posted it on:
http://community.livejournal.com/bannan_banger/

i have finaly found a book idea (i have thousand of book ideas some crape some so amzing however when i come to write it i forget some detail and then spend hourse cursing my luck. it needs a better title however the book in itself is amazing most of it came to me in a dream that i can still vividly remember now. at the moment i writing it by hand page by page (will take me years) and when i’m finshed it will be checked rechecked and then checked again for mistakes.. anything that is wrong with it. it is called at the moment the maverick adventures of stephan and son.

at the moment i have writen elen page double side of A4, the idea for this story came from a quite long and vivid dream that has lead me to write this book (stange no?) would you like to here the details of the dream mabey some psycolagist can figer out what it means?