1poptart1

hey i wrote a poem, what do you guys think of it
Last night i dreamt of you you held me in your arms saying you loved me as i try to hold back that tears that are over flowing my eyes i love you too he pulls me closer harder to breather his arms griped tight around me the smell of you over whelming me as i stand on my tip toes you lean down pressing your soft lips to mine my heart skips a beat i wake up all that surrounds is darkness i dreamt of you of us for the first time i felt safe. well what do you guys think good bad okay, please tell me