Now, where did the time come from? I shall tell you “Let’s give them a random time to make this bull shit seem more believable.”. Deus, I am disappointed in you, carrying on Mythos’ far fetched lies is an arduous job and rather one which would need something a bit more dramatic. You need some hocus pocus explanation to it. Let me know when you guys are locked in a mental asylum for shouting out that you are a prince of a made up place. :3 Try LSD, that might get you to Avalon quicker. Also, your “ritual” resembles very much a Wiccan/ Pagan style one with the use of candles, and other such ‘mediums’ along with the chanting. Hmmm… Again, plagiarising from other already existent things destroys credibility.
Edit: Oh wait, oh well, I just read the magic bullshit I was looking for, did you copy it from charmed or a cook book?
Now, if any of you are actually serious about writing anything, whether it is an entry or a story, I suggest you begin to pay attention to spelling and punctuation. Believe me, it may make what you are doing seem minimally more realistic and the thought of a book less of a mockery. Ok, to begin with, after a full stop or as you may call it a period, you usually have a capital letter.Also, many seem to have something against writing the word “you”, it is three letters people, not that hard! You get no where in life by being lazy, so get moving.
Lesson number two will come shortly.
I see so many new people now! Must be that all that paranoia must have . I am warning you, it is not hard to read the whole goal and see what people are looking for. :] Well, we want the goal to more open to others, so, I guess that is a start. YAY!