To all native English speakers! :) Is there anybody willing to look through my introduction (2 pages) and conclusion (2 pages?) to check if there are any grammar mistakes? It’s nothing too difficult ;) I’d be very grateful for your help! If yes, let me know here!:)
tahti's Life List
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1. remember that nobody and nothing can destroy my happiness
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2. find somebody who would proofread my MA thesis
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3. decide what to do after graduation
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4. be more organized
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5. write memoirs from my gap year
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6. remember about the universe
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7. improve my English vocabulary
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8. draw more
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9. Live Without Fear
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10. get my driving licence
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11. take more pictures...better pictures
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12. start running again
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13. list 100 things to improve the world and do them
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14. live each day as if it were my last, but learn each day as if I'll live forever
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15. Create a List of 365 Life-Inspiring Quotes
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16. See every movie that Jake Gyllenhaal has ever appeared in.
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17. attend mass in Hebrew
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18. travel to Finland, the shore of the Atlantic ocean, to Southampton, Germany, Tibet, Petersburg etc.
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19. Learn where every state of US is situated; learn capital of every country in the world
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20. visit Jerusalem
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21. learn more about other cultures
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22. write a book
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23. visit every continent
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Recent entries
Introduction/Conclusion
5 months ago
Proposal :P
5 months ago
As for now, one thing I know I’ll do for sure, is that whatever I’ll do I’ll do with my boyfriend, yyy… fiance I mean :P We got engaged on Sunday :) So, traveling around the world, diving, jumping from the parachute, crossing the North Pole… so much awaits us ;-)
Motivation
5 months ago
I need to fight too high sugar level in my organism, health is most important, i don’t want to end up a diabetic so I need to take care of myself, and I’ll do it. I can fight the illness and I’ll succeed.
Today was the first day: 25 minutes of running, pleasant weather, nice surroundings…
