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This day I am re-opening a series of questions so more than one of us can cooperate to develop a thread on haiku  — 5 months ago

Worth doing!

Am on path. May I share?
road converges:
goose-bumps,
exhale.

boots,
road,
thumb!

(Note: Once again re-considered points both the ones made earlier by teacher& most recent. Have been reading haiku here, your columns, in anthologies, & an edition of Richard Wright’s recently published what for so long lay forgotten in the Wright family archives.) The Richard Wright style of haiku probably is counter to what you, sir teach; but I am not intending to follow his style, rather to see and compare and know, then find my own style or way. To seek my own path maybe is to be born again, not in the sense of the Christians, but maybe to become, as Nanabozho’ of the Ojibway, to transform… to what? We shall feel it.

If you know to read and compose in Japanese, I might use your assistance, if you would be so very kind as to correct what are my first efforts in translation:

Boots take road,
home not alone—
welcome geese!

ブーツは道を、家に単独で—歓迎されたガチョウ取る!

De laarzen nemen
alleen weg, huis niet:
welkome ganzen!

The French proves some what equally if not more challenging than the Dutch. I chose to use a more colloquial not proper French, maybe more of a tourist jargon or patois:

Commences la route,
à la maison pas seule-
- les oies venues !

I could NOT resist the temptation to experiment in the simple Chinese, using as I did with the Japanese, the Babelfish translator device:

起动上路,
在家不单独
—受欢迎的鹅!

Certainly one needs help from a poet fluent in the Japanese or the Chinese, & such would be much appreciated, thank you and forgive my clumsy attempts.

Another question if you allow:

起動上路, 在家不單獨—受歡迎的鵝!

Should these be aligned vertically? They are traditional Mandarin? Thank you!

I took a second look at the Japanese, and played with the line back to lines:

ブーツは道を、
家に単独で
—歓迎されたガチョウ取る!

Last line in English could be back translated to

“Welcome れ Moth-Butterfly You Take,”

Of course we know this is a translator software, but let us not worry about that right now, but enjoy the game that is allowed by what tools we have. Note: Japanese students & teachers, please you are “Welcome!” to help if you are so willing, and domo arigato!

歓迎さ by itself means “welcome!” does it not? Then what is the meaning of the character れ ?

How might I change to revise any of the above, please?

Ботинки принимают дорогу,
домой самостоятельно -
- радушные гусыни!

You can see, one has substituted the longer “добро пожаловать” for the adjective for “cordial” or радушные.

Again, one returns to the Japanese to try a slight variation:

ブーツは道の歓迎されたガチョウだけを起点に選ぶ。

This is instead of the English original changing L1 to “Boots choose path”

What is the sound of this word, please? For highway,

ハイウェー

as opposed to road:

道

or

way

方法

The above 2 characters translate back to One-Law:

Law = 法

Going back to the character æ–¹ which in traditional Mandarin Chinese means

side…

Compare now the traditional Chinese phrase

起動選擇方式

which in Japanese is

ブーツは方法を選ぶ

Thus I substituted the L1 above for

Boots choose way,

so you see…

Now I am ready for my nap.

(((yawn)))

Next time, maybe some one can help with the Korean or what not?

So “boots choose path” in Hangul

시동은 방법을 선택한다

Is that correct? If not, what then? Thank you, kamsamnida!

너를 감사하십시요

ありがとう

謝謝

Thanks again! : )

I mean -- how can you NOT ?  — 9 months ago

it Is, after all.. INEVITABLE !! LOL

My pup Ladybug  — 10 months ago

this morning she now refuses to eat or drink and her chest is very very swollen with fluid.She is not doing well at all!! She is 15 years old and has cancer.This is just really hard to deal with right now.

holy crap...  — 1 year ago

..the last year of my life has been totally outta control. I thought I had reached a point where I was in control of things, and then absolute hell broke loose. I lost my show car (8 month project) in an accident that separated my shoulder, then I shattered my hand & needed 2 operations to repair it, had to drop out of school, then outta the blue I found out that my aunt had cancer and a month later she passed, then a month later my classic camaro (8 YEAR project) was rear-ended & totaled.

This ‘life’ thing is way too difficult. Things are claming down now, so hopefully i’ll get a few months without any major disasters. I still haven’t really dealt with everything that has happened so far so I really hope I get a few months to make peace with everything. Figured this would be a good time to start writing again.. to help me work through it all.

in memoriam  — 1 year ago

My aunt Stephanie died on Sunday, March 25th. I have nothing personal to say right now, but a website was set up in her memory HERE. Donations can be made to the American Cancer Society through the site. There are beautiful pictures of her, and stories of her life will be posted soon. She was an amazing person, and she will never be forgotten

life is so #ucked up  — 1 year ago

My aunt hasn’t woken up since the last day we talked to her. This is all happening way too fucking fast. She called us to tell us that the mass was cancerous, and that was it. No more calls, no going out to visit her, no goodbyes. I suppose i’m still holding out some hope for her to wake up, but I think only for my own comfort. I know in my heart that it’s over, but it’s so hard to deal with whats going on when she’s just lying there unconscious. It’s almost as if we’re waiting for her to die, and it’s the most awful feeling. I can’t grieve because she’s still holding on, but there’s basically no chance of any recovery. I just don’t know what to do with that. More importantly, I can’t imagine what her family is going through. They have to sit there day after day watching her sleep, just waiting for her to pass on. I just don’t understand how this could all be happening so fast. She had a pain in her back three months ago, and now she’s about to die. What the fuck is that. As a psychologist, a philosopher, and a casual theologian, I can’t find any possible reason for things to come to an end for her like this. She spent her whole life passionately striving to make the world a better place, and in a heartbeat everything is taken away from her and her family. It’s fucked up. That’s all I have to say

worth doing  — 1 year ago

Worth doing!

it has saved me from useless bouts of frustration.

Untitled  — 1 year ago

I recently found out that my aunt has a cancerous mass in her back. There were a lot of people at her house when we spoke though, so she didn’t want to give any details. The fact that she wouldn’t talk about it, tells me that it’s serious. If it wasn’t a big deal, she wouldn’t delay explaining it to me… she would’ve told me then. She also said that she has to work out a disagreement within her family, which is most likely the decision whether or not to undergo treatment. I just don’t know what to do with myself… she is one of the few people in my family I am genuinely close to. She’s my dad’s only remaining relative, and I don’t know what he’s gonna do without her.

I’m doing my best to stay strong, because in the end, she’s the one who will suffer. It’s just not right.. she’s such an amazing person, and she deserves so much better. Her house is powered by solar panels to conserve energy, she keeps a water bucket in the shower to reuse the wasted water in her garden, she’s a vegetarian, she’s a therapist, and she does everything she can to make the world a better place. She’s in her 50’s, but she’s one of the most active people I know.. she completely loves life, and truly appreciates every moment. She regularly goes rafting, mountain-biking, hiking, she loves snowboarding, goes to film festivals, etc. She flies across the country three times a year just to see me and the rest of my family.

I just can’t accept that she’s gonna call me up and tell me that she’s dying. I’ve just never known anyone to enjoy life more than her, and it’s not right. As I said, I still don’t know much, but I have this horrible feeling in the pit of my stomach… I keep trying to think positively, but I can’t shake the feeling that she’s got very little time left. This is just all wrong..

Not doing so well...  — 1 year ago

...with this goal right now. I was recently in a car accident, and my poor Lincoln was destroyed. It took me three months to find it, I flew 800 miles to buy it, spent 6 months modifying it, and now it’s gone. So many bad things had to come together to cause the accident that I just don’t understand how. The chances of it all happening so perfectly are just unimaginable. If that wasn’t bad enough, I was one out of ten Lincoln LS’s accepted into a car show later this month, and I found out the day before the accident that I had final approval to be in a calendar for 2007.

And as if things couldn’t possibly get any worse, the insurance company said they might not be able to cover the car, so I might just be out my $30,000 investment. I have a severely separated shoulder, i’m stuck wearing a neck-brace, and I got a concussion when I broke the driver’s window with my head, but other than that I wasn’t hurt too badly. The guy who was riding with me only has scrapes & bruises, but the entire back half of my car is gone. I reached in the back seat after the accident to look for my cell phone, and I was touching the inside-out trunk lid. The police said they were in shock when they came up on the mangled car, and we were just sitting behind it. In fact the CD case that I keep in the car was found over 30 yards from the accident scene.

All in all we’re lucky to be alive, so I can’t forget that, but it just doesn’t seem to even matter right now. I would be devastated if my friend was hurt badly, or god forbid killed, but I really couldn’t care less what happened to me. That car was everything to me, and I don’t know if i’m gonna be able to cooperate with the fact that it’s gone forever. Not to mention that I can’t work anymore, I now have no transportation to college, and I may have to make payments for the next 3 years on a car that doesn’t exist anymore. I’ve been through enough to understand how lucky I am to be alive, but I don’t think I deserve to have everything taken away like this. I’ve already been in one serious accident, and it turned my life upside down. I just don’t know if I have the strength to do it all again.

I forgot this for awhile...  — 2 years ago

“No amount of travel on the wrong road will bring you to the right destination.”

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