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A reckless enemy overpowers the life of an innocent soul
Breathing in the last breath of the defenseless
Grasping the throat of the helpless innocent
He laughs with depth over the suffering of him
How can one be so cruel…
The numbness of my skin
The thumping of my heart
The stiffness of my bones
The insanity of my mind
The resurrection of my memories
The tingling in my nerves
The rhythm of the chimes
The cold nip in the air
Its a feeling strange,a feeling unknown
The darkness of the night sky
The glittering of the stars
The shyness of the moon
Soothes my inner mind
The luminosity of the moonlight
The silence in its arms
Its dream to meet the sea
Its love for the horizon
The dominance of the night makes the twilight weak
This whole dream takes me to a state of rapture
Of all the freinds I’ve ever met,
your the one I don’t regret.
And if my life ends before yours.
i’ll wait for you at heaven’s doors.
And as i sit on Heaven’s floors,
I’ll wait for you to open the doors.
I’ll wait forever if I have to,
I’ll wait and wait and wait for you.
And if God sends your soul to Hell,
I’ll beg him to let me go as well.
And if he says my soul belongs here,
I’ll say to him with one single tear:
“God, my friend, she is my world, she’s the one that makes my day.
The one who in the morning I wake up for, the one for whom at night I pray.”
“I can’t let her go, not even if I tried,
not in any life of mine.
She is my sky, she is my day,
She is my sunshine.
“God, if you will not let me go, I have just one thing to say.
I love my friend more then the world and next to her I will stay.”
Today sometimes I wonder what my world would be like without you,
my skys so grey, my thoughts so blue.
But then I thank God so happily
that I only have to wonder and that it’s not reality.
I love you with all my heart,
and I promise I always shall.
But as for now there is no need to fret,
Because I will remain your pal.
Of all the friends I have met,
You are the one ill never forget.
And if for you and I depart,
My friend, you’ll always remain in my heart.
By: Briahna Shaniuk
There is this guy I thought I knew.
I really felt a dream come true,
With soft black hair,
and sparkling eyes.
A caring stare,
Your taller than me-what a surprize.
When we talk,
In his eyes i get lost,
But there is also something in his walk,
And his personality I would take at any cost.
He makes me perfect,
Laughing and alive;
Though getting in touch is quite hectic,
Why I keep going cannot be discribed,
Your loving arms around me,
The tast of your sweet kiss.
So whole when I am with thee-
Apart from you I cannot help but miss,
But now I fell diffrent.
I heard og another girl you havn’t let go.
What is going on- Will you let me know?
I cannot begin to understand,
You seemed to like me so much.
And now you got me in the palm of you hand,
In your grasp I free to touch.
The past days I’ve hoped with all my heart,
That she is with you I pryed not.
I’m not fond of such a part,
But the reason I care is because I like you alot.
As I satre at the sky,
I see a shooting star.
I think of you,
And all that we could be.
I made a whish
Upon that shooting star,
Hoping that you will love me.
The way that I love you.
When I looked into your eyes,
I knew it was true;
I love you
And I thought that you loved me to.
Since you found a girl;
I wish I was her,
But I’m not,
And I won’t stop wishing for you.
Day after day
I wish you would hold me tight.
Kiss me with those soft lips,
And say that you love me.
But every time I see you,
You’re holding on to her,
You’re kissing her gently,
And saying that you love her.
I love you more than words can say,
I wish I could hold you night and day.
I’ll love you alwasy and forever,
Even if you don’t love me.
sweet, sometimes my heart makes mistakes, i love you more than anything..im worried theres something i have to do, ill have to go for awhile, but i promise your my future..when
i came back hoping you would be waiting for me..i kept phoning you but you never picked up i even sent you letters, i even screamed for your name day and nighthug,
who cares about the time just promise you’ll hug me and accept me for who i am, baby i love you, baby i love you so much, each time i say something ur name comes in it, when i
saw through your eyes i saw my face, without u any..moment is a waste of life..now that i have you for today.. ill pray i have you for the rest of my life ..just come into my
arms
and forget the past..baby i love you..thoughts,sometimes laughter sometimes tears..each morning and night ill give you the brightness of the morning and the happiness of night..everywhere i look i see you, on my
lips is your name and only your name..lalalallalalalalallllllllllllllllllaaaaaaaaaaa just always love me from your heart..flow away,let this, let this relationship grow..passion and aggression, can i leave it somewhere..far, im not far away from your heart, even if we have different bodies..passion
and aggression, can i leave it somewhere..theres always brightness in a relationship just wake your heart up..from
generations..you cant hide love ,even if you try..now dont you leave me here, dont leave my heart, dont run away with a excuse..my life will go if you leave..
I like how you look at me.
I like how you touch me.
Kiss me.
Squeeze me.
I like how you take me to your arms.
I like when you press yourself against me.
Kiss my neck.
Bite me.
I like how your hand goes on my leg.
I like how you touch gently my cheek.
Move my hair off my face.
How you smile.
I like when you take my hand to your hand.
I like how you make me laugh.
I like how you just come and take me.
Without any questions.
Without any doubts.
I like that you are part of my life.
In my heart.
Everyday.
The intensity of a heart brimming with adoration for an individual is indecipherable.
The way she sees him in her own way is incomprehendable.
If she had to choose one person to spend forever with, it would be him until infinity and beyond… the funny thing is, is that she wouldn’t think twice about this life changing decision.
When she sees him, the one, the love of her life, her heart begins to quiver and electrify, nothing else matters now… but him…
When she hears his voice, to someone else it might sound like a rusty old bike being ridden but to her its music to her ears, food to the starved, life to the dead…
If she gets to talk to him, her words; tangled and wrong, her hands; trembling, her face; bright red with embarrassment, and the most predominant change; the sound of her love swelled heart palpitating against her ribcage…
The sad thing is, is that he doesn’t know, she has to look at him almost every day of her life knowing that they can never be…
how many time can one heart be truly broke
some say a million i say once your heart can only
truly love one person my heart has truly only once
been broke how do i know this it becaues when your heart has truley
been broken like mine you would do anything to get it back but it never workes becaues it been lost and it an ever lasting pain
that stays with you forever. but it will also take something very powerful away from you it your full abiltity to truely love or ever trust someone again so be careful and dont fall for the same guy i did or you will be like me no one you truely love or will ever realy wont to again.
RoaringRyokan wants to learn a foreign language
Record an album
learn Swedish
Start using SVN.
learn about wine
create my own music lyrics and perform my own lyrics
Go skydiving
have an affair
live life to the fullest
go to Germany
go to japan
do a decent arabesque
mySaviorlives wants to Read the entire Bible
DONLOAD INUYASHA MOVIES,EPISODES
make a video game.
Be less shy
dont know
see Venice before it sinks
be the best Aunt ever
Sophie wants to Keep my nails looking nice
act
Be a designer
to test myself on summer job
Gta San Andreas
meet Jared Padalecki
