Abort, re-entry; there is no shame. The finished work should be rich and symbolic, elegant and spare, instead of the piece of gaunt illustration it is becoming. The main part of the painting remains successful and works in a completely simple way. The idea of using a series of emptying boxes as metaphor (for what?) looks shallow and dare I say it- Sex & the City.
I am saving the work from cliche. I will photograph the attempt and salute its effort.
Fresh attack tomorrow? I am in need of energy, dramatic and stilted as it may sound. I am stilted.