to be able to wright songs like many of the great song wrighters

idk what t rghti’m confusied and dontknow what to do i dn’t hnki sa believe n m self

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Well, ya this song is kinda sad and all that but it’s the first song that I’ve had COMPLETELY written. Music and all that. Please tell me what you think.

(v.1)
Can you hear me?
I am standing in the dark,
sleeping, slowly going away.

(paino/gutair solo)

(v.2)
Swirling mist,
hiddensecrets,
darkness covering me.
prowling things,
watching me,
wake me up from this endless night!

(chorus)
Sometimes it’s funny,
sometimes it’s sad,
the dreams in which I’m dieing,
are the best I’ve ever had.
Those deadly dreams. (echo)

(v.3)
moving swift,
dodging fast,
panicked breath,
in my chest,
getting lo9st in my lonelyness,
surrounded, I finally stop.
take my life,
take my soul,
watch me fade into the cold.

(chorus)

(v.4)
take me now,
end it now,
watch me fall in a surrendering bow.
comming close,
endless fear,
this dream is done, my mind starts to clear.

(chorus)

Well, I’m a song writer but I’m having a hard time deciding what to do with them. My friend and I have decided to start a band and use some of my songs but we need to find a few other people to join before anything major happens. Hopefully something huge happens and we can finally get things started.

She keeps the fan on high
even though she is cold inside
he steps outside for a smoke
thinks this all is a joke

with this time around
she makes no sound
she takes the time to look within
needs more time to relive her sins

(chorous)
when the sky is falling
you can come calling
let me be the one to hold you up
just the one to get you through

let this be my way to make amends
for past transgressions and past sins
the love inside you take it with
this in life this is no myth

(chorous)

life is too short to waste on this
the madness must not persist
the coldness inside us all
will be overtakes whne spring overtakes the fall

i will put up some lyrics in the near future please don’t laugh but be honest

songs like colorful by the verv pipe, anything by rob thomas, train, anything that touches everyone on a personal level. I think i have enough inspiration in my life fom my wife. and everything else that has happened in the last couple of months has brought exciteing new experiences that i could feed off of to wright!!!!