A sad girl named Alice: As she walks alone at night after receiving a text message from her new boyfriend Thomas saying he is gonna blow off giving her the sexual attention she needs. to get drunk with some friends. Alice’s face fills up with frustration and angst as she walks along the street, she realizes shes getting hornier and hornier the longer she waits…. She turns a corner and she sees the house of a friend in which she had rejected for many years,his name was jack.She had always had a secret THING for jack but would never say anyhting because well…he didnt fit right with her friends or parents, he was always that guy who no one knew, he was a loner. So as she stares down the house she notices there is few lights on and no cars on the street.. As her hornyness increases so does her need for the male touch, she walks a little faster towards that house, Knocks on the door and waits… She knows someone’s coming but is impatiently waiting. Jack answer’s the door in confusion since him and Alice have been on Non-Speaking terms for quite a while now… He Says “Hey? what do you need?” She says “I dont know, i just was passing by and i thought… i would say hi” lucas looks at her with confidence and said “that can’t be all you want” while smiling with a little swagger… And she says “yes… Me and you, we have always had a thing…. But, it just hasnt worked out for the two of us… So, just for tonight, lets just let it go and fuck, i really need this” she says as she smiles while biting her lip impatiently.Jack gazed into those eyes and makes her suspend her needs for a couple more minutes with small talk, and makes a few jokes and eventually they find themselves inside. He tells her how good she looks and she responds by saying “no talking” she pushes him aggressively on the couch to physically proclaim her dominance, she quickly pulls up her sweater but has trouble as Jack looks at her push-up bra as she struggles her hips rub against her knee almost as if she was dry-humping his knee. she finally gets her sweater off and is embarrassed as her long hair is spread apart. He kisses her neck quickly but sweetly, she keeps on removing items of clothing. Jack, who is still fully dressed at this is starting to get stiff down below, She smiles as they meet eye to eye and she bites her lip and makes a “uggnn” sound as she unzips his pants. She starts by licking his dick, but eventually gets into a full blown b-j. He struggles to move in this position because she gives the blow-job of a godess, but he manages to reach toward her right breast and grip it. He starts to rub as she starts to pant, she can’t help herself anymore she rips her bra off and jumps on top of him, as fast as she can she puts the head of his dick in her tight pussy, and screeches a little and tries to hold it in but its exactly what she was craving. She eases into it little but little as he grips her hips and thrusts her, she feels as though she is gonna scream, and she does… She lets out such a roar of plessure, it made him barely hold his own. He slows her down by easing slower and slower and eventually gets into a quick pace. She breathes in and holds her breath for as long as she can until she screams consistently, She feels as though she can’t take it again and she has a magnificant orgasm as her tight pussy throbs, and oozes out, her nipples are harder than a diamond and she is wet from sweat and her voice is cracked. But Jack isnt done, he picks her up and mounts her on the floor, where she just waits innocently as if she was being controlled by another soul, she has no control, and she likes it. He thrusts into her as she screams every thrust over and over as her breasts are going up and down and over, as he grabs the right one she grabs his hand and presses farther into it, he uses the other hand to hold her other arm down. She knows it’s coming, she just lays and screams at the top of her lungs “UHNHHNGGGG OHHHHH Yes!” She is satisfied, but he isnt. She stares at him in amazement as if she had gotten exactly what she wanted, but he wasnt done. He pinches her nipple as she screeches shortly but plessurefully. She Is exhausted but does not want to stop, her hair is sweaty and changing directions at all times and ends up in her eyes. He takes one finger to get it out of her eyes as he kisses her neck for 15 seconds as he thrusts and continues his mission. He knows she wants what he has, and he is gonna give it to her. He thrusts harder than he had all night and she begins to lose control, he eyes begin to look as though they are going up into her head as her pussy throbs she screams one final time “OHHUHHHHNN!!!! YES!! YES!!! OOO” and he lays on top of her as they are both satisfied they laugh a little and they kiss one last time, as she gets dressed and walks out the front door…
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The food is neatly stacked on the picnic blanket: cheese straws, an array of different fruits, cottage cheese with different biscuits, proudly packed on a tray, glazed figs for desert, two kinds of cheese and different cold meats and a special plate of biltong just for my special guy, and our special bottle of wine. It’s almost sunset and we want to watch the last rays of the sun, sitting on the beach at our favorite spot, having something to eat and drink, while we stare at the sunset together, savoring the last rays of warmth, staring at the orange glow over the calm, shiny waters, and hold hands, as if wishing the moment would just never end.
I smear a biscuit with the salmon cottage cheese, feeding it to you, watching as you open those luscious lips to have the biscuit enter your mouth, and looking at the moistness of your tongue, my nipples react immediately, to my thoughts going back to the evening when you savored them for the first time, in your warm, wet mouth. Not saying anything now, I hold the thoughts to myself, reminding myself wordlessly to mention it to you later. You tell me something about the waters and the effect this time of the day has on you and we talk about God’s wonderful creation and the pleasure it gives us to enjoy such wonders. I get up to sit between your legs, and this time, you feed me one of the delicacies on the fruity side and hungrily, like it’s the beautiful pink head of your manhood, I take it into my mouth and savor the fruity taste. Rubbing my arms gently, cos I mentioned I’m getting a bit cold, you talk and kiss my hair and the slow, rhythmic, gentle sounds of your voice is so soothing to me and I just love being in your presence. No age difference is apparent now: just us, two people enjoying each other’s company, savoring the other’s presence, loving each other’s touches and closeness.
The beach has strangely gone deserted, but then again, we are sort of hidden from the public eye and quite private too. As the dusk close in on us gradually, I provocatively creep up into you: wordlessly motioning you to hold me tighter, and you so oblige. It always amazes me how in tune we are with one another: we don’t have to voice certain requests out loud…it naturally comes with us. You hold me gently, yet so tightly and your warmth makes me shiver, yet so comfortable and secured.
Stroking my hair, which I love so much, you plant kisses on the top of my head, and involuntarily, I lift up my face to you and you start kissing me, gently, lightly and somehow, dunno when, it went over to passionate kisses.
Soon, the food miraculously moved to the one side, to make space enough for us to lie down on. You are on your back and I am slightly atop of you, and my hands are all over you, rubbing you up and down your spine, to your beautiful firm chest and back…and stopping, right above your belt. I look into your eyes, and see the approval there for me to continue…I struggle a bit with loosening the belt, but soon, my hands are inside your boxers. The front area already wet with precum from your obvious arousal. What a beautiful, beautiful feel that is: touching your erection: firm, hard, stiff and so milky white!!! I could feast on it for days and never want to ever stop!!!!!!!!!
I gently take it out, not only because I was so careful not to hurt you, but also because it is so precious to me!! I hold the throbbing manhood in my hand for a while, for the cool air to blow over it, before I gently start my assault on it. Licking it down it’s length, stopping just in front of the balls, the most beautiful sack ever to me!!!! Gently, I rub the twins, again, carefully too, because of it’s value, and I hear your soft moans of pleasure. I stop my visual admiration of them, and plunge it into my mouth, so hungry to savor every little part of it: beautiful, white flesh, so precious, so succulent, and so wonderful!!! You lift yourself up into my mouth, wanting to go deeper down my throat, and as hungry as I am to have it, I allow you to thrust deeper. Again, your size just amazes me and I feel so blessed to call it mine for now.
I suck it down it’s length, in an eight formation, rubbing the loose flesh up and down, causing wonderful sensation, I gather, by your audible moans, licking the shiny head, sucking, drawing the pre-cum out of the tiny, juicy hole, while playing gently with balls, so soft and fleshy, but quite hard too.
I hear you whisper I should do it again, and happily I oblige. Running it in and out of my wet, warm mouth, sucking it eagerly, gently and happily!! I think you want it a bit faster, so I go a little faster, yet slow enough to tease you, and you gently grab my head, to push it down on you, so you can enter my mouth deeper, as if you’re inside my wet, warm love hole….!!
I take it out of my mouth, unbutton my blouse and put it between my soft and heavy breasts….giving it rhythmic strokes. The softness causing your erect manhood to moan with louder pleasure!! You call my name, and I vaguely hear you, cos my heart beats so loudly in my ears now with all the excitement. I then kiss you, having stopped my assault on your cock, wanting you to taste yourself, and you ask me if I would mind you visiting downstairs…and of course I won’t…I hunger for your warm, wet tongue inside of me!!! Very hungry now, you go down, lift up my skirts and discover that I wasn’t wearing any underwear, and no preparation was needed, cos I was soaking wet, and some of the juices have dripped on my skirts, creating a wet spot…so hungrily you suck up the juices to start your eager assault on my clit, which by now is so heavily swollen. I lift myself into your tongue, like you have done to me earlier, and the wonderful sensation causing me to lose partial control. Your tongue flickering over my clit, make me so horny, you lick my labia, the softer lips on the inside of my soft spot. Because I wax regularly, you have no hassle finding the right spots on my pussy. Your tongue flirts from one place to the next, causing havoc there. You thrust it deeper into my love hole, and I make circular movements to grant you better access there…and suddenly, you stop, spreading yourself onto me, kissing me to taste myself and I kinda like my own taste. …and oh boy….then you gently go inside me…thrusting gently, slowly, but firmly!!!! Oh honey….the experience of you inside me: so stiff, so hard, so firm and so perfectly suited for my love hole…and we start our own unique rhythm…up and down, circular movements follow, and we never lose our rhythm!! We are made for this, we are made to suit each other perfectly in this very intimate way. You thrust deeper, lifting me into you, with your hands placed underneath my bums. I have encircled you with my legs, for better and deeper access. My breasts crushed into your chest, and we enjoy each other’s bodies, kissing, thrusting, making love!!! Not aware of anybody else that might pass us: just two people, loving, caring, sharing their bodies!!!! Then I feel you go faster, deeper, harder, and I know….we are ready to climax together!!!! You whisper: come baby, do it with me…come with me…!!!....and I moan, you moan,…and I tell you that I’m close…and you say< hold on, love….wait for me….!!! A few hard thrusts, deeper, harder…and you shout..now, Sweet….come with me!!!!
And I shout…only loud enough for your ears….and we hold each other tight…and we erupt together, flying away to our own piece of heaven…to linger there for a while….!!!!
Sweaty bodies, clinging to each other, having just savored one of God’s most wonderful moments…two bodies that became one…..what a wonderful, beautiful picnic we just shared….!!!!
We met at the beach: on the brink of sunset…each sitting in his/her own car, waiting for the other to get out to walk towards each other. They weighing went on for a few seconds as our eyes met, wondering if the other is what we expected us to be. Surprisingly, against all my sober thoughts and discussions with myself…..I liked what I saw, despite the age difference….and thought, this is going to be really interesting.
So I got out of my car and headed towards him, who just got out of his. Hmmmmmmmmmm..I thought…I love the height and built….this boy is going to be trouble, I just knew it!!! On prior instructions from me, he didn’t shake my hand in greeting, like I asked him to, but gave me a tight, yet gentle manly hug…and it confirmed my earlier thoughts: this boy is going to be big trouble!!
Very confidently he said that he’ll follow me on my way home, since I suggested that we could spend some time at my place. Obviously, I cleaned up my place profusely, knowing I had a very special visitor coming over the evening. My daughter was forbidden to even eat in the lounge, like her teenage habit is!! On stepping into the house, I felt the closeness with him already, but reprimanded myself to behave..which is very difficult for me who’s always so full of energy. He said he quite like the place and it’s cosy, and I thought, oh-oh….here we go!!! My thoughts were spiralling in all sorts of misbehaving directions, and yet again, I had to caution myself. I went to sit next to him, and he smelt so delicious, his perfect body fitting nicely onto my couch, as if the couch was designed just for him. I was suddenly so shy and nervous, and wondered whether he could read the sexual excitement and tension in my body language, but I guess I fooled him this time, cos I appeared very confident, I thought. We started talking and to my embarrassment, he asked for something to drink, which indicated that he DID in fact notice my discomfort.
I got up, poured us some ice cold coke and sat down talking again, getting past the usual formalities, and then I HAD to mention his beautiful teeth and sexy, gorgeous lips, on which he repaid the compliments. We started talking about church and I was still talking, when he said: Oh man, sorry for interrupting you, but I really have to kiss you right now….!!! Of course, I started melting inside…cos this boy is a man so dear to my heart…saying all the right things..and now DOING what I couldn’t stop thinking of since I met him!!!!!! Oh boy….He placed himself almost on top of me, and started kissing me these soft feather light kisses..which was awesome, but so frustrating, cos I wanted more and passionate ones at that too!!!
I controlled myself though, cos I was enjoying this boy’s kisses so much, and shamelessly, I lifted myself up into him, so much that only my breasts were flattened against his hard, young chest….his lower body was purposefully lifted out of my reach..and how utterly frustrating!!!!!!
We agreed, no sex on the first date, but I wanted it and so badly, I wanted to scream….and it was so unlike me!!!! How was I supposed to know that he would be this damn handsome in real life, and carry so potent a sexuality, that I wanted to rip his clothes off the minute I saw him!!! Caution, girl, caution…I coached myself….and his kisses wouldn’t go deeper, like he knew he was teasing me and that my lips haven’t been kissed in soooooooooooooo many years!!!! But then, I thought to take a little control, and push him down onto my breasts, flattening the soft roundness even more and I LOVED the feeling of him partially on me!!! I stretched my hands out on his back and lightly ran it up and down his bare back…hmmmmmmmmmm…what a nice feeling it was, feeling his soft, yet firm skin under my fingers….and then I dared to run my fingers lightly down, under his belt, to feel the soft, firm skin of his bottom….and barely, lightly into his crack…hoping, he’ll succumb to my erotic exploring of his backside….
His kisses betrayed his sexual tension, but he was unmovable. His breathing was a little labored and I could feel that he was aroused, but still, he was unmovable, and despite my frustration, I developed a deep respect for this young man. My respect for him, heightened my sexual attraction for him, but I knew I wasn’t going to get any further with him than kissing, so thought I had to devise a plan and quick. I stopped kissing him, and never thought I would do it, and not sure where THAT came from, but I invited him into my bedroom, scared that he would reject me, but WOW…he didn’t….confirming my suspicions that he wanted it as much as I do…NOT the sex, but the closeness!!!! Of course I rejoiced..and was so eager to feel his body on top of mine, or if not, then close next to me!!! We barely landed on my bed, and he was indeed on top of me, kissing passionately, touching my huge, round breasts simultaneously and what a wonderful, erotic feeling that was. I was craving for this man’s kisses and touch and anything he wanted to offer. He straightened his body on top of mine and it felt like heaven…this young, virile body, firm and hard, spread on top of me, and through our denims, I could feel his hardness, and my softness wanted him so much: to touch, to feel, to have, to lick, to suck! Never ever have I wanted someone so badly, like I wanted him? One problem, he wouldn’t let me have him, and it was ok. We lay talking, kissing, exploring, and then, he suggested that I could touch a part of his most private parts and I was happy to oblige. I wanted some of the milky white flesh, and so happy to touch only a little part of him. He was so aroused, and bigger, thicker than what I ever imagined, and I said, God, you’re good!!!! hahahaaa!!. I touched his balls, my heart started racing, I was so hungry to suck and lick and he invited me to do just that!!! I wanted to have him in my mouth, all of it, play with my tongue along the length of his virile manhood, to lick the pre-cum off the beautiful shiny head, to have my lips engulf his softness and push it further down my throat, but it wasn’t meant to me, so I had to settle for a beautiful, wonderful tasting part of it, and hungrily, I licked, touched, sucked, and heard his soft moans!!
When I was done, he touched me a little on my hidden parts, which frustrated me more than easing the throbbing. My clit, I could feel, was so swollen and ready to be touched, I was so silky wet and warm, if only he had put his hand there, but I knew he wouldn’t, and didn’t even suggest it!!! FRUSTRATING!!!
And then…the most beautiful thing happened: he was going to do it for me and I had the most wonderful, honoured position in the house to watch!!! right in front of him!!! I handed him some hand lotion on his request..to wet his beautiful, hard, stiff manhood with it, and started stroking himself…I was AWED…I wanted to cry, so emotional and honoured I felt..I could only watch in admiration as he busied himself…..getting ready to please me in a whole new way…and I loved the wet sound it made…Oh boy…I wanted there and then to undress myself, and get busy with my beautiful, caramel, wet flower, but I couldn’t move as I watched him…spread out on my bed, manhood in left hand and stroking himself…!!!! Rhythmic strokes, and soft moans coming from him…and then I felt it…the climax…he convulsed, shooting his seed partially over himself and my bed…and I wished I could lick it off him, but knew he was going to stop me…My eyes were focused on his beautiful still erect manhood, and if I had my way, I would’ve put it between my naked breasts and let it rest there for a while, until he had recovered, cos I knew my love hole, wet and warm, was out of the question…..
Then the phone rang and it ended the magical moment and wonderful two hours we spent together…!!
One thing I know for sure, I want him, badly, passionately and without a doubt…!!
I want to get a short erotic story Ive just written published, have spent a couple of hours trying to find publishers details without any joy- does anyone have any suggestions? cheers!
It hasn’t even begun , I love to write but the stuff I write is mostly adult oriented. Think my biggest thing is actually finding the right words to put into my stories. And then there’s my writers block. So far I only have I think three of my erotic short stories done. I’m trying to get a hold of Hustler or Penthouse or something like that to see if they are interested , it would be a start anyways. Then there’s my erotic demon novel I’m working on,.....it’s called Death Travels and I’m only as far as starting the third chapter. I have the first chapter I sent into literotic, it’s published on their site , but i have another part to add to the first chapter , and I have yet to send in my second chapter. I started this around about March of last year. It’s a work in progress. If I ever get it published I don’t know, but… I can try .
I have written four or five stories and have them published on eroticstories.com and they have been well received but I’m not sure about hot to get these published or even if I should. I sometimes wonder if my lack of experience makes them less authentic. I’m just not sure.
I wrote one story, still unfinished. Never thought of publishing it, but may be I should try.
I have had the very good luck to have three erotic fiction stories published in print in the last year. I can’t tell you why the stories were chosen, or what made them worth publishing.
I’ve published a lot on the web, but there was nothing like the thrill of opening an anthology and seeing your story and your name listing in the table of contents.
It’s well worth doing.
Hugs,
remittance girl
The story is edited (after many delays), and I plan to send it off by Friday while I’m taking care of some other errands. Then, it’s time to get started on my next short story! I already have one in mind. ;)
